Comic 35 - Page 33
14th Jan 2012, 7:12 AM in Chapter One
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Author Notes:
killersteak edit delete
So all this came out a little differently than was written in my script.

"Gilgarow kicks Luthon away and grabs the stone. Still bombarded from the guards, he seeks cover back behind the rocks. But Yuelle is there and she's picked up the fallen staff. They stare at each other in shock for a moment before Yuelle fires the thing square at Gilgarow's chest."

For one, I didn't want Yuelle to seem too ruthless just out right firing the thing.
For two, I wanted a little more tension. hence Gilgarow grabbing Yuelle again and using her as a shield.

Something like that. I thought you might enjoy a little insight into my thinking. It's hard self editing.
User comments:
Ginger Phoenix edit delete reply
Ginger Phoenix
Just read through the archive and I must say I'm impressed! I'll be following this story you count on me for that. Keep up the great work! :D
killersteak edit delete reply
Thanks! You made my day :D
Low edit delete reply
My script ends up evolving a whole lot as I actually start paneling for some reason. I always come up with better ideas as I see it drawn.
Paul Rose (Guest) edit delete reply
Ginger Phoenix edit delete reply
Ginger Phoenix
Oh, you are most welcome! :D
Sleeper edit delete reply
I like the way it played out here better than as scripted. Better development/tension. Good call.