Comic 88 - Page 11
22nd Aug 2014, 2:01 PM in Chapter 3
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Author Notes:
killersteak edit delete
Now this is something I should have had at the end of chapter 1. At one point I seem to recall chapter 2 notes opening with Yuelle and Luthon talking to King Fireblood about what happened. I didn't want to get bogged down in explanations though. But critiques seemed to bring up 'why didn't anyone suspect Yuelle?' So I took the chance to explain it here. Ah well. I'm learnding to rite.
Speaking of responding to critiques, I threw in a quick page into chapter 1 to try and help out the story and fix it for new readers. Dunno if it works too well. I'm half considering another one, something to clue in to why the King picked Yuelle, but I'm undecided on that.

um. yay story telling.
User comments:
Proxy170 edit delete reply
Hm...her story was *mostly* true. But now she's officially lied, and any future revealings will only hurt her more.
killersteak edit delete reply
I think she's safe for now though.
Centcomm edit delete reply
keeping your story straight is the hard part here..
killersteak edit delete reply
Indeed it is
dpat57 edit delete reply
Potential for fun ahead, though, if anything Yuelle says here rebounds back and smacks her on the kisser later!
killersteak edit delete reply
I'm designating a sticky note to it for later.