Comic 88 - Page 11
22nd Aug 2014, 2:01 PM in Chapter 3
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killersteak 22nd Aug 2014, 2:01 PM edit delete
killersteak
Now this is something I should have had at the end of chapter 1. At one point I seem to recall chapter 2 notes opening with Yuelle and Luthon talking to King Fireblood about what happened. I didn't want to get bogged down in explanations though. But critiques seemed to bring up 'why didn't anyone suspect Yuelle?' So I took the chance to explain it here. Ah well. I'm learnding to rite.
Speaking of responding to critiques, I threw in a quick page into chapter 1 to try and help out the story and fix it for new readers. Dunno if it works too well. I'm half considering another one, something to clue in to why the King picked Yuelle, but I'm undecided on that.

um. yay story telling.
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Proxy170 22nd Aug 2014, 3:52 PM edit delete reply
Proxy170
Hm...her story was *mostly* true. But now she's officially lied, and any future revealings will only hurt her more.
killersteak 23rd Aug 2014, 2:50 AM edit delete reply
killersteak
I think she's safe for now though.
Centcomm 22nd Aug 2014, 8:42 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
keeping your story straight is the hard part here..
killersteak 23rd Aug 2014, 2:51 AM edit delete reply
killersteak
Indeed it is
dpat57 23rd Aug 2014, 12:00 PM edit delete reply
dpat57
Potential for fun ahead, though, if anything Yuelle says here rebounds back and smacks her on the kisser later!
killersteak 23rd Aug 2014, 12:09 PM edit delete reply
killersteak
I'm designating a sticky note to it for later.
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